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An agree / disagree essay is not asking you to discuss both sides. You only discuss both sides when the instructions ask for it. Please see my advanced lessons, any mistakes will cause you to get a lower band score:
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Most discussion essays ask you to discuss both sides and give your opinion. This dictates your introduction. You should paraphrase the two sides that IELTS have given as your background statement and then write your opinion as your thesis statement.
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The instructions ask you to discuss both sides and give your opinion. That means those instructions should be contained from the start to finish of your essay. You put your opinion in the introduction, body paragraph and conclusion – the same with the discussion.
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Introduction paraphrased question without opinion
Body paragraph for the first side
Body paragraph for the other side
Conclusion with opinion.
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It is to be considered that university graduate is the key to find a promising job while some think that experience and interpersonal skills are essential. In my opinion, university education is necessary for academics job and soft skills for management jobs.
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Hello, i have a question regarding the structure for discuss both views. I would like to know if this is also an accepted structure for example.
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It depends on the type of essay. If it is an opinion essay, your opinion is in the introduction and throughout the entire essay. If it is an adv disadv essay, there is no opinion at all. Read through my model essays to learn more.
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On the one hand, many people think having university degree helps them in finding excellent career and job, as education clears the basics for the job. To make the idea more clear, I would like to discuss a practical example. Large companies such as Microsoft, Amazon prefer to hire university graduates and trained them according to their needs. Apart from this, during degree individuals study different courses and undergo internship which prepares them for job that’s why countries like Canada encourages international students to come and study.